aprilhenry ([info]aprilhenry) wrote,
@ 2008-03-18 12:16:00
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Teaser Tuesday
Jeff wanted to be inside. He wanted to be warm and dry and with nothing around him that wasn’t manmade. No wild animals, no dead people, no parts of dead people, no dark wet shadows under bushes. Everything clean and neat and tidy.

But first he had to tell the police what he had found. Let them take care of it. That was their job, to deal with the things that weren’t clean and neat and tidy.

About twenty feet behind him lay a clearing. He hurried over to it, holding his phone in front of him, but taking frequent glances back at the hand, as if it were capable of scurrying off on its own. He lifted the phone up to the clear spot of sky. For a second, the display flickered. But even as he felt a surge of hope, it went back to reading “No signal.”

Jeff had to get out of here. Get out of the woods. Get back to civilization so that he could call the police. But if he left, could he bring the police back here? To this exact same spot? What if he couldn’t find this place again? What if the animal came back for its lunch?

With dawning horror, Jeff realized there was only one solution.

He would have to take the hand with him.



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[info]susanwrites
2008-03-18 07:48 pm UTC (link)
oh my gosh!

How could I NOT keep reading. I love this!

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[info]aprilhenry
2008-03-18 11:44 pm UTC (link)
I knew from the beginning that there was going to be a hand. It wasn't until a couple of weeks ago that I wondered what happened AFTER he found the hand.

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[info]amymcauley
2008-03-18 08:20 pm UTC (link)
EEEEEK!
Now I want to read the rest...

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[info]aprilhenry
2008-03-18 11:44 pm UTC (link)
Next March, you can!

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[info]lkmadigan
2008-03-18 10:46 pm UTC (link)
Aaaaaghhhh!

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[info]aprilhenry
2008-03-18 11:51 pm UTC (link)
I feel kind of bad about Jeff. He doesn't reappear in the book after we see him being interviewed on TV. I think I'll give him a girlfriend in my head.

There. That should help.

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[info]deenaml
2008-03-19 01:57 am UTC (link)
Woah!
Is SHOCK POINT coming out in paperback any time soon? I'd love to use it for a YA Library Book Club selection -- I think it has girl and boy appeal. ???

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[info]aprilhenry
2008-03-19 02:30 am UTC (link)
October 31st I believe!

And I hear from lots of boys who like it. It's certainly not a prom dress or first kiss plot.

I would be happy to answer emails from kids if any wanted to email me.

PS Woah is my 12-year-old's favorite word

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[info]deenaml
2008-03-19 11:32 am UTC (link)
Cool! (On the pb release, your willingness to read emails from YAs, AND your kid's fav word. :))

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[info]marla67
2008-03-21 08:04 pm UTC (link)
I've been having a terrible time trying to get my 12 year old daughter to read. 'I only read hard bound books', she says. 'Ok, how about this one', I say. 'I only read mysteries', she says. 'Fine, how about this one.' 'I don't like the first paragraph, It's boring'.....blah blah blah. A bunch of excuses. Then, I got out my (personally signed) copy of Shock Point and said 'This is really good. You should read it.' I left it on the kitchen table. It took her a couple of days to pick it up. But when she read the first page she was hooked. She read it in two days. Straight through. She loved it. She may not read another book until you come out with one.....

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[info]aprilhenry
2008-03-21 09:16 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! A year is a long time to wait. If she liked it, tell her Fake ID by Walter Sorrells is really, really good and kind of like Shock Point.

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[info]quiller77
2008-03-19 02:14 am UTC (link)
Awesome. :-)

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[info]aprilhenry
2008-03-19 02:19 am UTC (link)
It was a fun scene to write.

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[info]quiller77
2008-03-19 05:24 am UTC (link)
I bet. I love writing tense scenes ... when I'm in the right mood. Otherwise it's a pulling teeth kind of thing.

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[info]aprilhenry
2008-03-19 09:21 pm UTC (link)
I think it's really fun to put people in trouble and figure out how they'll get out.

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[info]onegrapeshy
2008-03-19 04:10 pm UTC (link)
OMG. I got chills!

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[info]aprilhenry
2008-03-19 04:37 pm UTC (link)
What was nice was that I hadn't planned on having that scene. It was a logical conclusion of something I had already written.

Sometimes I think we give ourselves clues and directions without even meaning to.

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[info]onegrapeshy
2008-03-19 04:53 pm UTC (link)
I totally agree!

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[info]parkerpeevy
2008-03-19 08:24 pm UTC (link)
Eeeewww!

Very suspensful. I'm ready for the rest of the story... gulp.

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[info]aprilhenry
2008-03-19 08:57 pm UTC (link)
I feel kind of guilty about Jeff. I have a feeling this will take him a long time to come to terms with.

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