I feel sorry for the ghostwriter
Just saw this in Publishers Marketplace:
The younger sisters on E!'s hit reality show Keeping Up with The Kardashians Kendall Jenner and Kylie Jenner's dystopian novel that takes place in a world none of us have ever seen and will follow two sisters on a journey filled with terror, mystery, drama and love, to Charles Suitt of Karen Hunter, for publication in Summer 2013, by Mel Berger of William Morris Endeavor (NA).
The younger sisters on E!'s hit reality show Keeping Up with The Kardashians Kendall Jenner and Kylie Jenner's dystopian novel that takes place in a world none of us have ever seen and will follow two sisters on a journey filled with terror, mystery, drama and love, to Charles Suitt of Karen Hunter, for publication in Summer 2013, by Mel Berger of William Morris Endeavor (NA).
Yeah. I've seen too much of the Kardashian world, thankuverymuch.
Blech.
PS Also, subject-verb agreement would argue for "none of us HAS ever seen"
But no. This is not the business of writing... it's the business of making money.... and sadly they don't need grammar, or a plot, to make loads of it!
never discourage young talent.
Re: never discourage young talent.