aprilhenry (aprilhenry) wrote,
aprilhenry
aprilhenry

Pul-leze!

The movie Premonition had many, many things wrong with it, but the one that bugged me the most was the main character who was shown running one moment and smoking the next. Why? Where was the motivation? And then as the movie went on, she wasn't a smoker any more. Or a runner, for that matter. None of the book editors I've ever had would have put up with me creating such a contradiction for no reason.

Kid has learned that just because the commercial looks good, it doesn't mean it is.

If you've seen the movie, share your favorite moment that didn't work.


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