aprilhenry (aprilhenry) wrote,
aprilhenry
aprilhenry

The world's longest sentence?

From a promo e-mail I just got:

"With multiple killings that mimic a 13-year-old murder linked to his brother Simon who met his demise in Die For Me, Special Agent Daniel Vartanian is certain that someone even more depraved than his brother committed these crimes and he's determined to bring the current murderer to justice and solve the mysterious crime from years ago."

Really, people. It's okay to break this into two or more sentences. You don't have to cram it all in.



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